Saturday 11 August 2012

Mars

For the trifextra challenge:
1 word
3 uses
33 words
To celebrate the landing of Curiosity.

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Mars god of war
Searching for new battlefields
Turns to the planets
If there was life on mars
He could stop for a while
But emptiness mars all hope
So his journey continues
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http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2012/08/trifextra-week-twenty-eight.html?m=1


6 comments:

  1. Clever to use a word with 3 uses. Very good.

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  2. Wonderful poem! Excellent 3 uses of the word *and* noting the landing on Mars! I read it several times; great job!

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  3. Ah the journey of war. Well done.

    Anna :o]at http://puzzelicious.blogspot.com

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  4. Ayyii! I love the last 'mars' the best! That was great.

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  5. Thanks for linking up with Trifextra this weekend. I loved your creative response. Instead of giving us three different uses for one object, you gave us three different uses for the same word. Clever!

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  6. Very clever! I read it thrice through.

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