Tuesday 30 October 2012

Whore

He dresses her up and sends her out
Tells her who to sleep with
Day after day
He takes her money
She gets scraps
She is a working girl
He is a whore
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Thirty three words written for Trifecta Challenge week forty nine. 
The word is WHORE, used in the context: a venal or unscrupulous person

16 comments:

  1. This is a little sad, but I like the switching of role names :)

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  2. you said it in far fewer words than I used. :)

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  3. please consider turning off captcha - and, yes, I know I came back to use it again just to put in my request.

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    1. Sorry. Didn't realise it was on. I'll get to it when I access a computer rather than my phone.

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    2. It should be disabled. Please could someone verify that it is.

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  4. checking captcha - thanks for looking into it. (this will take two comments) :)

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  5. Very well done. So much in so few words.

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  6. I love 33s when a story is told well, which it is here. He's a pig, too!

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  7. I like how this is set up like you're going to use the first definition of the word, but then you switch it around to apply to the pimp. Nice :)

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  8. very well written. You told a good story in only a few words.

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  9. very nicely done. i love you used working girl to refer to her.

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  10. Great stuff, especially those last two lines - the simplicity of this was excellent.

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