Tuesday, 30 October 2012

Whore

He dresses her up and sends her out
Tells her who to sleep with
Day after day
He takes her money
She gets scraps
She is a working girl
He is a whore
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Thirty three words written for Trifecta Challenge week forty nine. 
The word is WHORE, used in the context: a venal or unscrupulous person

16 comments:

  1. This is a little sad, but I like the switching of role names :)

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  2. you said it in far fewer words than I used. :)

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  3. please consider turning off captcha - and, yes, I know I came back to use it again just to put in my request.

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    1. Sorry. Didn't realise it was on. I'll get to it when I access a computer rather than my phone.

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    2. It should be disabled. Please could someone verify that it is.

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  4. checking captcha - thanks for looking into it. (this will take two comments) :)

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  5. Very well done. So much in so few words.

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  6. I love 33s when a story is told well, which it is here. He's a pig, too!

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  7. I like how this is set up like you're going to use the first definition of the word, but then you switch it around to apply to the pimp. Nice :)

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  8. very well written. You told a good story in only a few words.

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  9. very nicely done. i love you used working girl to refer to her.

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  10. Great stuff, especially those last two lines - the simplicity of this was excellent.

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