Wednesday 22 May 2013

Dan Pedantic

Dan Pedantic
Man unromantic
Obsessive, compulsive
Never impulsive
Wakes every day
Same exact way
Shower, shave, sit …
Stand, flush, brush
Floss, rinse, dash
Calm, never frantic
The daily antic
Of Mister Pedantic
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Exactly, precisely 33 words (not including the title).


9 comments:

  1. Niiiiiiiiiice! I really like this. :)

    best,
    MOV

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  2. Loved this. Creative and lyrical.

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  3. Nice! Perfect use of the word!

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  4. This is fun! (And a little too true for those of us who tend to stick to routines :))

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  5. Most excellent! This a very amusing poem. I could easily see this as a song. Most entertaining.

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  6. Haha! My kids are really into the Mr. Men books right now. This is Mr. Pedantic. I love it.

    Remember to come back and vote at the end, ok?

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  7. This is great--one of my faves so far. (:

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  8. Yes... I can see this guy in front of me.

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  9. Oh Mr. Pedantic-you are so unlike your very, very clever creator! Love this!

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