Arch Enemies, you and me
Life’s purpose is
Creating tension to hurt, to wound, to maim
Hating one another, until
Empathy between us
May over time grow, and
You become my friend
ALCHEMY
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33 words written for Trifecta Challenge Week Seventy-Two
Using the definition "an inexplicable or mysterious transmuting" for the word Alchemy
cool - like the acrostic -
ReplyDeleteClever!
ReplyDeleteVery neat!
ReplyDeleteInteresting
ReplyDeleteThat's one way to fit in the prompt :D
ReplyDeleteVery clever!!
ReplyDeleteWell crafted acrostic.
ReplyDeleteAnd you become my friend - that is an alchemy worth the effort. Great flow to the acrostic. Clever take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteLoved the structure and the highlighted letters of the Acrostic. Enemies becoming friends - oh wouldn't it be loverly. Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteSo well structured!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful, hopeful piece.
ReplyDeleteI totally loved this. that's all, I just loved it.
ReplyDeleteExcellent acrostic Rog - this is one of my favorites that I've read so far.
ReplyDeleteThey say it's a fine line. Terrific acrostic!
ReplyDeleteGood job with the prompt! Love the way you used the word in the acrostic, and defined it as well.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of the prompt word! I love the idea of alchemy as a change in a relationship. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite use of alchemy so far this week I think - great metaphor. And rings true without being heavy handed. Good one!
ReplyDeleteExcellent use of alchemy! Fun, direct and profound.
ReplyDeleteExcellent and clever!
ReplyDeleteFinally finished the taxes and catching up. I like this. Maybe give it a try with one of my last few a-z unwritten.
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Thanks for the feedback - taxes - yuck...
DeletePardon my ignorance - what is this a-z unwritten.
this is extremely creative!
ReplyDeleteAcrostics are fun. Bravo.
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