Wednesday, 27 March 2013

Poor Thing


“.... trapped under the rubble, was no choice but to amputate.”
I’d recounted the events so many times.
“Poor thing”, they always said.
“Poor thing - no way.  Lucky me. Could’ve been both legs.” 
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33 words written for Trifecta: Week Seventy.
Using the word prompt lucky with context producing or resulting in good by chance : favorable

Trifecta Writing:

9 comments:

  1. Well, that kind of puts Lucky in perspective. Good one!

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  2. Oh excellent! I have to remember to think like that! :D

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  3. Oh geez, yes, lucky that it wasn't both legs, but the tragedy... well done evoking the emotion.

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  4. Yup, the only way to move forward! Nice.

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  5. Nice little piece on perspective (and I'm impressed with your ability to keep it to 33 words! I pretty much always push right up to 333)

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  6. That's one way of looking at it (:

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  7. I guess he was one of those 'the glass is half full' optimists

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  8. Wonderfully optimistic-love how the narrator looks at his amputation as being "lucky"-excellent work:-)

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  9. This is great. With a positive attitude like that, nothing will stop him.

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