Thursday, 28 February 2013

Doctor Doctor



A Doctor doctoring
Is better than
A doctoring Doctor
Especially when
The doctoring Doctor
Practices doctoring
Additively adding
Spreading and scraping
Such Doctor is not
Fit to be doctorer
If I am doctoree
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Written for Trifecta Challenge Week Sixty-Eight

Using the word Doctor with context:
a : material added (as to food) to produce a desired effect
b : a blade (as of metal) for spreading a coating or scraping a surface

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10 comments:

  1. Draug28 February 2013 at 12:43

    Surpisingly, I followed it through to the end lol Great bit of word play (:

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  2. tedstrutz28 February 2013 at 13:14

    Nicely doctored...

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  3. steph28 February 2013 at 14:28

    So cute... if I am doctoree - I love it.

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  4. Anonymous28 February 2013 at 15:09

    real clever take on doctor ^^

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  5. Barb28 February 2013 at 15:39

    Now say that 3 times really fast. ;-) Nice.

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  6. lumdog20121 March 2013 at 02:08

    I think you doctored the prompt nicely.

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  7. Renee1 March 2013 at 05:15

    Everyone else said all the good stuff, so all that's left is...I Like It!

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  8. Anonymous1 March 2013 at 08:41

    This made me think of the "Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers" thing my aunt and uncle taught us as kids (their entertainment was listening to us butcher it as we repeated it back!)

    I agree - I don't want a doctored doctor either...I'll take the doctor doctoring instead :)

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  9. Atreyee1 March 2013 at 20:37

    Like a tongue twister but rolls off it-great piece of writing:-)

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  10. kymm1 March 2013 at 23:31

    Rhythmic and fun!

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