tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post69436439189809493..comments2023-03-25T21:15:24.806+11:00Comments on (RogRites) Rites: LandingBetaRuleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08097429542668286279noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-4451849108014427612012-08-11T07:39:12.836+10:002012-08-11T07:39:12.836+10:00Nice! I wonder if that's how he really felt.Nice! I wonder if that's how he really felt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-55538322021432012332012-08-10T15:06:22.942+10:002012-08-10T15:06:22.942+10:00Great surprise ending.Great surprise ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-5114126292370944632012-08-10T12:05:25.552+10:002012-08-10T12:05:25.552+10:00I can only imagine the feelings that went along wi...I can only imagine the feelings that went along with that historical flight. What an experience to have had.<br />Thanks for linking up with us this week. Please come on back tomorrow for the new prompt.Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-16303577363092481372012-08-10T11:13:27.903+10:002012-08-10T11:13:27.903+10:00Thanks to all of you for your comments and feedbac...Thanks to all of you for your comments and feedback.BetaRuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08097429542668286279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-15666144682515224992012-08-10T07:49:24.357+10:002012-08-10T07:49:24.357+10:00Nice. I agree with Carrie with the slightly chopp...Nice. I agree with Carrie with the slightly choppy feeling of the first paragraph. That being said, I love the unexpected ending. A very nice piece!dontpanic2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/03748395349482914590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-53691551715117105972012-08-10T03:17:05.762+10:002012-08-10T03:17:05.762+10:00nice twist.
My only critique is that first paragr...nice twist.<br /><br />My only critique is that first paragraph is very choppy, the sentences don't feel quite complete.Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-68866024373390385242012-08-10T02:47:49.467+10:002012-08-10T02:47:49.467+10:00I didn't expect the ending, but it makes the w...I didn't expect the ending, but it makes the whole piece make more sense. I'd definitely have my heart in my throat if I was doing something that grand!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-86344139382230118282012-08-10T00:54:47.510+10:002012-08-10T00:54:47.510+10:00nice end! definently didn't expect it!nice end! definently didn't expect it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-57729919748645646582012-08-09T02:40:59.239+10:002012-08-09T02:40:59.239+10:00Great story telling here. The ending done perfectl...Great story telling here. The ending done perfectly.Whispering Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-86253944962075211262012-08-08T21:37:55.941+10:002012-08-08T21:37:55.941+10:00A trifecta: the first comment to my first trifect...A trifecta: the first comment to my first trifecta entry and my first post. <br /><br />Thanks.BetaRuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08097429542668286279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-38850355950359214472012-08-08T13:42:35.906+10:002012-08-08T13:42:35.906+10:00Great narrative and surprise ending. I thougt the...Great narrative and surprise ending. I thougt the reference to the "ladder" was peculiar, but I never guessed what you were wrting about!lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-80179332589481412782012-08-08T13:12:54.270+10:002012-08-08T13:12:54.270+10:00Yikes! Big, big step and unexpected here. The ulti...Yikes! Big, big step and unexpected here. The ultimate adventure...Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-23621943907288029372012-08-08T12:00:25.526+10:002012-08-08T12:00:25.526+10:00Amazingly told. My stomach would have been in kno...Amazingly told. My stomach would have been in knots.Jeannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03029315698053637410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-22653168959671348062012-08-08T10:53:23.941+10:002012-08-08T10:53:23.941+10:00perfect! I love unexpected.......
best,
MOVperfect! I love unexpected.......<br /><br />best, <br />MOVMOVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00782183723607923501noreply@blogger.com