tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post3196863172056663472..comments2023-03-25T21:15:24.806+11:00Comments on (RogRites) Rites: WaitingBetaRuleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08097429542668286279noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-37816847291099309822012-09-09T13:17:29.163+10:002012-09-09T13:17:29.163+10:00Nice response. I like how it described the scene ...Nice response. I like how it described the scene after nighttime came.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-49905773577761214992012-09-09T06:55:14.231+10:002012-09-09T06:55:14.231+10:00This carries the story through very well. :DThis carries the story through very well. :DLinda Vernonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534589087083244876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-22749342699688058782012-09-09T06:17:40.954+10:002012-09-09T06:17:40.954+10:00I could imagine here standing there with her palms...I could imagine here standing there with her palms on the window and it brought out the OCD in me because she's going to leave prints! LOL. Nicely written. Jeannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03029315698053637410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-72393370215778047302012-09-09T03:29:26.364+10:002012-09-09T03:29:26.364+10:00A feeling of hopelessness and despair. Nice emotiv...A feeling of hopelessness and despair. Nice emotive choice.Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117409443842865395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-61293516816004664322012-09-09T00:53:51.187+10:002012-09-09T00:53:51.187+10:00Lovely imagery. And the waiting is so poignant in ...Lovely imagery. And the waiting is so poignant in this piece. lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-85330012668200909052012-09-08T11:05:25.371+10:002012-09-08T11:05:25.371+10:00Neat take on the prompt. I too like the repetitio...Neat take on the prompt. I too like the repetition here. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-26966440424566224092012-09-08T09:01:40.093+10:002012-09-08T09:01:40.093+10:00it felt so... empty. yet, written lovely. i especi...it felt so... empty. yet, written lovely. i especially liked this part, i found it to be the strongest bit: "palms on the window/ waiting, watching but not knowing" Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-12398225455831532462012-09-08T07:37:51.299+10:002012-09-08T07:37:51.299+10:00I love how the second verse is sort of a reflectio...I love how the second verse is sort of a reflection of the first. Kenya G. Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03901164070843042029noreply@blogger.com