tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post3189352526998672692..comments2023-03-25T21:15:24.806+11:00Comments on (RogRites) Rites: ForeverBetaRuleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08097429542668286279noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-89645352900902219452013-01-17T01:16:19.781+11:002013-01-17T01:16:19.781+11:00aha! a good surprise ending. suggestion: "...aha! a good surprise ending. suggestion: "As punishment, and, a signal to her sisters Penelope would be frozen." no comma after "and" and put a comma after "sisters."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-18863992021499593002013-01-15T07:28:29.042+11:002013-01-15T07:28:29.042+11:00Very cool. I like the fact that you turned to Gree...Very cool. I like the fact that you turned to Greek mythology for this one. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-17820099875768132082013-01-14T10:07:56.932+11:002013-01-14T10:07:56.932+11:00oh, very nice this one. I like your interpretation...oh, very nice this one. I like your interpretation of the prompt. train-whistlehttp://www.trainswhistle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-15873265960817170892013-01-14T09:24:04.184+11:002013-01-14T09:24:04.184+11:00So that's why Penelope didn't make the cut...So that's why Penelope didn't make the cut. 'They couldn't be trusted'... Don't mess with Zeus! Good story.tedstrutzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09853272125990540823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-40943475500865286522013-01-13T19:22:18.405+11:002013-01-13T19:22:18.405+11:00Brilliant. Brilliant. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-12262595928482676652013-01-13T17:46:07.875+11:002013-01-13T17:46:07.875+11:00Dear Roger,
Zeus, eh? I love it when older gods r...Dear Roger,<br /><br />Zeus, eh? I love it when older gods rear their hoary heads and send messages to the mortals. Keeps the newer ones on their toes. <br /><br />Thanks for the great photo. Worked for me.<br /><br />Aloha,<br /><br />DougDouglas MacIlroyhttp://ironwoodwind.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-79724679918881193872013-01-13T00:21:13.864+11:002013-01-13T00:21:13.864+11:00I'm glad it has worked, and thanks for facilit...I'm glad it has worked, and thanks for facilitating. BetaRuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08097429542668286279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-90931748734691340952013-01-13T00:20:04.630+11:002013-01-13T00:20:04.630+11:00Thanks, and yes her should be inserted (at the exp...Thanks, and yes her should be inserted (at the expense of word count). Perhaps ...although very painful...... Would be better. Thoughts??BetaRuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08097429542668286279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-1419690805740941692013-01-12T22:20:22.962+11:002013-01-12T22:20:22.962+11:00Muses, yes! This works well with the prompt. It ...Muses, yes! This works well with the prompt. It seems we're getting a lot of poetic-type stuff with this, which is why I have enjoyed reading everyone's stories ... and yours. Nice work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-57599847502200017052013-01-12T22:05:22.035+11:002013-01-12T22:05:22.035+11:00Dear Roger,
Now that was original. Good job and t...Dear Roger, <br />Now that was original. Good job and thanks for the photo. As you can see it's garnered some creative responses. <br />Shalom,<br />RochelleRochelle Wisoff-Fieldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090374697915874481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-31909793640226923682013-01-12T22:00:26.251+11:002013-01-12T22:00:26.251+11:00i'm absolutely cray cray over Greek mythology....i'm absolutely cray cray over Greek mythology.. how you thought of this.. brilliant!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-18917415180478118882013-01-12T17:36:21.059+11:002013-01-12T17:36:21.059+11:00I really enjoyed thisI really enjoyed thisbillgncshttp://bwfiction.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-42697949318690736302013-01-12T15:44:59.651+11:002013-01-12T15:44:59.651+11:00A nice mythological story. I liked the way it seem...A nice mythological story. I liked the way it seemed at first just like a love story, and evolved into a classic tale of the gods. RonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-58493466881483220032013-01-12T13:58:29.092+11:002013-01-12T13:58:29.092+11:00This is a long way from the prompt - an impressive...This is a long way from the prompt - an impressive show of inspiration. Did you mean "It pained *her*"? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-29559877838567453702013-01-12T10:35:08.355+11:002013-01-12T10:35:08.355+11:00A very creative interpretation of the prompt, and ...A very creative interpretation of the prompt, and very strong imagery...the hotblooded lovers turned to wooden instruments! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-23016088278849048602013-01-12T06:42:27.080+11:002013-01-12T06:42:27.080+11:00I agree. The music of the gods is not always harm...I agree. The music of the gods is not always harmonic!!janethttp://sustainabilitea.wordpress.com/2013/01/10/friday-fictioneers-music-the-speech-of-the-soul/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907341770435208247.post-53442289920467151082013-01-12T02:04:51.830+11:002013-01-12T02:04:51.830+11:00An original take on the prompt. Nicely done.An original take on the prompt. Nicely done.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.com